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HI!
Hi!
- To be honest, I'm new here so I don't know what have I write about, I think I'll write you about my hobbies.
- So I've already written that I love sport, to be specific: I practise taekwondo ( it's korean selfdefence - martial art), I've practiced it for 6 years, I've already been in Bled and Misk (I won the bronz medal) on the Europien championships and in Tajikistan on the World championship.
- Thats all for now, Bay :)

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- To be honest, I'm new here so I don't know what have I write about, I think I'll write you about my hobbies.
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- To be honest, I'm new here so I don't know what have I write about, I think I'll write to you about my hobbies.
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- So I've already written that I love sport, to be specific: I practise taekwondo ( it's korean selfdefence - martial art), I've practiced it for 6 years, I've already been in Bled and Misk (I won the bronz medal) on the Europien championships and in Tajikistan on the World championship.
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- So I've already written that I love sport, to be specific: I practise taekwondo ( it's kKorean selfdefence - martial art), I've practiced it for 6 years, I've already been in Bled and Misk (I won the bronze medal) oin the Europiean championships and in Tajikistan oin the World championship.
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- So I've already written that I love sport, to be specific: I practisce taekwondo ( it's kKorean selfdefence - martial art), I've practiced it for 6 years, I've already been in Bled and Misk (I won the bronze medal) oin the Europiean championships and in Tajikistan ~~on the~~ World cChampionship.
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- Thats all for now, Bay :)
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- That's all for now,¶Baye :)
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