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It's a nice day
- Today it is sunny, I want to enjoy this day, maybe going to the beach, pool, or another place to spend a nice time with friends or my brothers.
Today I want to eat ceviche and chicha morada.
It is so delicious.
- But I am a little bit sad, because this monday I must come back to work.
Now I am on vacation.
- See you friends!!

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- It's a nice day
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câu 1
- Today it is sunny, I want to enjoy this day, maybe going to the beach, pool, or another place to spend a nice time with friends or my brothers.
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- Today, it is sunny,. I want to enjoy this day~~, maybe~~ by going to the beach, pool, or another place to spend a nice time with friends or my brothers.
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câu 2
- Today I want to eat ceviche and chicha morada.
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câu 3
- It is so delicious.
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câu 4
- But I am a little bit sad, because this monday I must come back to work.
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- ~~But~~However, I am a little bit sad, because this monday I must come back to work.
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câu 5
- Now I am on vacation.
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câu 6
- See you friends!!
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- See you later, friends!!
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