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Text from Petite_Ukrainienne - English

    • Obesity is a phenomenon present all over the world.

    • The most frequent disease in our modern life si obesity.
    • Over a billion people in the world are in overweight.
    • This problem is topical and do not depend of social status, living area, age or sex.
    • In economicaly developped countries 50% of population suffers from overweight and 30% from obesity.
    • Every year the number of children and adolescents suffering from obesity growes.
    • We can consider obesity like a global epidemic.
    • People in overweight had more diseases then people with normal weight.
    • The link with obesity and the second type of diabet was prouved.
    • What is the obesity causes ?
    • The cause is the violation of power balance in organism.
    • The power arrievs in our organism with food.
    • If we don't use this power, the excess of calories used for fat synthesis.
    • Gragually the fat grows in our organism and we begin to gaining weiht.
    • In our modern life most people spend the « sedentary life », every day use public transport, lifts, and sitting in offices.
    • We spend a lot of time in front of TV and computer and all this promotes overweight.
    • This disease is the result of 300 000 deaths evary year.
    • The USA guvernment for example spend yearlly 147 billions dollars to fight the obesity and all diseases that are in conscequance of.
    • The damage for ameroican economic is 865 billions dollars.
    • So how to fight this problem ?
    • For prevent it people need to eat rationnally and practice regular sport activity.
    • Besides this they need to live a healthy life, to have a resonable work and rest mode.
    • And the thing that will push to do it is a desire.
    • Desire to change theirs lifes.

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