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Text from cocia12 - English

    • Going to a coffee shop

    • when i stay at home and try to study, it is hard to fouse on what i need to do now.
    • there are so many thing i can do in my house.
    • i can watch tv , computer or i can sleep.
    • so i usually go to cafe to study.
    • i know there is not quiet but there is white noise.
  • I think this white noise makes me more focus on what i do. i don't know why.
    • but main thing is coffee. i think i am addicted with coffee. i drink coffee at least 2 times.
    • so everytimes i go to the coffee shop, i can enjoy drinking coffee and do study. i can do what i like and what i need to do.
  • There are many desert. and i like eating sweet things with my friends.
    • so like when i find nice place, i suggest friends go there with me.
    • I think it is one of ways to enjoy my life.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English