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AUTA KORJAAMAAN NYT!korjaamaton

Text from cocia12 - English

  • Travel

  • Recently i've been to New York.
  • It's actally my first time to go there. so i was so exciting. because all of my firends told me you should go there!
  • i was kind of woerried because before i got there, the weather was so bad. so i felt sad. but weather was getting nice.
  • It was kind of difficult to find the location where we wanted to go, but there were nice poeple to help us. so our tour was going to easy and fun.
  • but still taking a subway was hard.
  • we want to the shopping, ate dinner at the popular restoreant and watched some musical.
  • I've never thoght i could be in Broudway so it was so impressed.
  • even i met nice korean people at the hotoel.
  • so we could share our imformation.
  • i would remenber this momory forever.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English