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- I`m lucky girl. thesedays I have to think positive at everything it`s not easy, but time goes by It`s better and easy.
- I start my work?(job).my company workers are very kind. so I`m happy.
- My new plan is make money and save.
- because i`m going to another country for study tourism This is my 2015year goals I have dream, so happy thesedays !

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- I`m lucky girl. thesedays I have to think positive at everything it`s not easy, but time goes by It`s better and easy.
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- I`m a lucky girl. ~~these~~Nowadays I ~~have~~try to think ~~positive a~~about everything~~¶it`s not easy, but time goes by It`s~~ in a positive way. ¶it`s not easy, but gradually It`s getting better and easyier.
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- I`m a lucky girl. tThese days I ~~have~~try to think positive aly about everything¶i.¶It`s not easy, but as time goes by Iit`s better and easyier.
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- I start my work?(job).my company workers are very kind. so I`m happy.
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- I ~~start my work?(job).my company~~ have started to work. My coworkers are very kind., ¶so I`m happy.
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- I have just started my ~~work?(job).my company~~ job. My co-workers are very kind~~. ¶~~, so I`m happy.
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- SHTO një KORRIGJIM TË RI! - Fjalia 2
Fjalia 3
- My new plan is make money and save.
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- My new plan is to make money and ~~sav~~to save some.
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- SHTO një KORRIGJIM TË RI! - Fjalia 3
Fjalia 4
- because i`m going to another country for study tourism This is my 2015year goals I have dream, so happy thesedays !
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- ¶because i`m going to another country ~~for~~to study tourism.¶This is my 2015 year goals.¶I have a dream, so I'm happy these days !
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