แก้คำให้ถูกต้อง

HELP TO CORRECT NOW!แก้ไขแล้ว

Text from paaulaa - English

    • My passion

  • I love music.
  • I think that music is my life.
    • When I'm listening music, my soul is in peace and my heart too.
    • Melodies and sounds are the representations of what i call " the desire of our heart" because I think that each singer use his melody and his sound to transmit something to us.
    • Music is good for the nerve and good for each of us.
    • Music is in each of us and we must try to develop our own melody of life to be more happy and more relax everyday.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English