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So cold today.
- i wearing a leather jacket, and black fur nevertheless cold weather made me shiver with cold I don`t like winter..
- one of wishlist is a as soon as possible leave warm country I can`t wait go to Austraila And.
- I`m gonna eat dinner now after dinner, i'll study english When i study english, I don`t like to have distraction of the phone, facebook So, I turn off the these..

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- So cold today.
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- i wearing a leather jacket, and black fur nevertheless cold weather made me shiver with cold I don`t like winter..
  Stem nou!
- ¶iI was wearing a leather jacket, and a black fur but¶nevertheless the cold weather made me shiver ~~with cold~~.¶I don`t like winter..
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- ¶iEven though I was wearing a leather jacket~~, and~~ with black fur~~¶nevertheless~~, the cold weather made me shiver. ~~with cold¶~~I don`'t like winter..
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- one of wishlist is a as soon as possible leave warm country I can`t wait go to Austraila And.
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- ~~¶one of~~On the top of my wishlist is ato, as soon as possible, leave for a warm country¶. I can`t wait to go to Austraila!¶~~¶And.~~
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- I`m gonna eat dinner now after dinner, i'll study english When i study english, I don`t like to have distraction of the phone, facebook So, I turn off the these..
  Stem nou!
- I`m gonna go eat dinner now¶a. After dinner~~, i~~ I'll study eEnglish.¶When iI study eEnglish, I don`t like to having the distraction of ~~the~~my phone~~, f~~ or Facebook~~¶So,~~ so I turn ~~off the these..~~ them off.
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