Korjaukset

Text from surilo - English

  • Pamela and Shufeek

    • This is history of a mixed race couple.
    • Your name is Pamela and Shufeek.
    • They meet at the Wimpy Bar was a fast food in the London.
    • In 1961 in the school holidays , Pamela had 14 years old and Shufeek 18 years old.
    • She want up to the counter and waited to be served.
    • Shufeek worked at fast food for won some money to family beacause had problem of money.
    • Shufeek took order of Pamela but she had not yet decided.
    • Shufeek advised him choosed a cupcake whith chocolate and raspherry.
    • Pamela fall madly in love with Shufeek and she decided what Shufeek after work.
    • He was surpised still see Pamela in the restaurant.
    • She asked him take coffee whith her and he accepted.
    • The spoke for many hours.
    • But Pamela's mother saw his daughter with a stranger.
    • The mother was very angry because she didn't want friendly with Shufeek beacuase he comes from Blangadesh.
  • Shufeek was very sad and Pamela too.
  • She didn't want to leave.
    • Two month later Pamela decided go with Shufeek in Canada and he accepted.
    • Five years later Shufeekand Pamela married.

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