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  • Marriage in the family

    • The article I'd like to render is entitled "Marriage in the family" and I believe it was written by a psychologist and was published in a local newspaper.
    • The article is about the difficulties of family life may be for young spouses and how to overcome them and save marriage.
    • The author's communicative aim is to give advice and some ways overcoming family conflicts.
  • In this article the author touches upon several problems connected with a problem of relationships between spouses and their parents, a problem of conflicts between a daughter in low and her mother in low, a problem of mouthers' selfishness, a problem of psychological difficulties of daughter in low to establish a relationship with her mother in low.
  • At the beginning of his article the author wants to make us ponder over of the following accute issues: What is relationship of the young couple with relatives? will young people create a strong family under the roof of the native house?
    • Should we start a life together with parents?
    • The author declares with such questions young couple see a psychologist.
    • People have some difficulties in family communication with spouses, kids and relatives.
    • The author proclaimes that parents react diffirently to the marriage of the son and the daughter's marriage.
  • Then the author gives an example, in which young spouses have a difficult choice divorce or family preservation.
    • The author reveals a brief biography couples.
    • Igor and Kate study in university together and after gaduation party Igor makes a prosal to Kate and she says positive answer.
    • After the wedding, the couple settle in a house of mother in low.
    • The author reveals she is an imperious woman who brings up her son along.
    • Her son is the best person in her life and she doesn't want to share him with Kate.
    • The cause of reproaches against daughter in low was the belief that Kate does everything wrong.
    • The author arouses in us a feeling of sympathy for the young woman.
    • There is vey difficult to win the prejudice of mother in low, inspite of personal qualities.
    • The author is sure that the prejudice can be evercame.
    • The author reveals that tact and tolerance for each other os essential aspects of preventing family conflicts.
    • The conflict occurs when a mother in low or a daughter in low wants to show that she is the most important person for her son or a husband.
  • The author is sure that bad mothers in low are those who bring up their sons for themselves.
  • The author takes up a firm attitude that she tryes to decide his fate.
  • She always wants to teach him, to be with him forever.

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    • The article I'd like to render is entitled "Marriage in the family" and I believe it was written by a psychologist and was published in a local newspaper.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • The article I'd like to recommender is entitled "Marriage in the family" and I believe it was written by a psychologist and was published in a local newspaper.
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    • The article is about the difficulties of family life may be for young spouses and how to overcome them and save marriage.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Theis article is about the difficulties of family life may be for young spouses anda young couple may experience, and also includes solutions on how to overcome them and save marriagese problems.
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    • In this article the author touches upon several problems connected with a problem of relationships between spouses and their parents, a problem of conflicts between a daughter in low and her mother in low, a problem of mouthers' selfishness, a problem of psychological difficulties of daughter in low to establish a relationship with her mother in low.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • At the beginning of his article the author wants to make us ponder over of the following accute issues: What is relationship of the young couple with relatives? will young people create a strong family under the roof of the native house?
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • People have some difficulties in family communication with spouses, kids and relatives.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • PSome people have some difficulties in family communication with spouses, kids andcommunicating with their family members (such as their spouses, children or relatives).
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    • The author proclaimes that parents react diffirently to the marriage of the son and the daughter's marriage.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • The author proclaimes that parents react diffirently to the marriage of the son andin one way when their son gets married, and another when their daughter' gets marriaged.
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    • Then the author gives an example, in which young spouses have a difficult choice divorce or family preservation.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • Igor and Kate study in university together and after gaduation party Igor makes a prosal to Kate and she says positive answer.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Igor and Kate studyied in university together and a. After graduation party Igor makes a prosal to Kate and she says positive answer, Igor proposes to Kate and she agrees to marry him.
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    • There is vey difficult to win the prejudice of mother in low, inspite of personal qualities.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • There is vey difficult to win the prejudice of mother in low, inspite of personal qualitiesDespite Kate's wonderful personal qualities, it is still difficult for her to win over her mother-in-law.
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    • The author reveals that tact and tolerance for each other os essential aspects of preventing family conflicts.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • The author reveals that tact and tolerance for each other osare essential aspects ofqualities for preventing family conflicts.
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    • The conflict occurs when a mother in low or a daughter in low wants to show that she is the most important person for her son or a husband.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • The conflict occurs when aboth mother -in low or a-law and daughter- in low wants to show that she-law compete against each other in order to prove that either person is the most important person for individual in ther son or a /husband.'s life
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