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Text from carolinevllry - English

    • profesional life

    • I think that it's possible to follow our dreams if we want that.
    • That depend of your goal, but if you really want do something, it's like you've need that, and you can with all the people who are behind/around you, who are here for you.
    • We all want to do the job we dreamed and we know a lot of person who succeed in life; however we know people who missed/failed.
  • So we must take the exemple of people who win because it will be a modal for us, if we take exemple on the people who loose, it will be a wrong way!
  • Finaly, the question is not it is possible to follow our dreams, in fact /basually it should be : Do you really want go away even if you fall, go away your profesional life dream ?

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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    • That depend of your goal, but if you really want do something, it's like you've need that, and you can with all the people who are behind/around you, who are here for you.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • That depends ofn your goal, but if you really want to do something, it's like you've need that, and you can do it with all the people who are behind/around you, who are here for you.
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      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 2
  • Lause 3
    • We all want to do the job we dreamed and we know a lot of person who succeed in life; however we know people who missed/failed.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • We all want to doget the job we dreamedt about and we know a lot of persons who succeed in life; however we know people who missed/failed.
      SlimoxicoSlimoxico profile picture Kommentit
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 3
  • Lause 4
    • So we must take the exemple of people who win because it will be a modal for us, if we take exemple on the people who loose, it will be a wrong way!
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 4
  • Lause 5
    • Finaly, the question is not it is possible to follow our dreams, in fact /basually it should be : Do you really want go away even if you fall, go away your profesional life dream ?
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 5