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- About my net friend
- I had a net friend.Until now, I still love him.But I will never see him again,because I deleted him last month.Both of us are in different country.
I miss him very much.

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HELP ELKE ZIN TE CORRIGEREN, AUB! - English

Titel
- About my net friend
  Stem nu!
- About my nNet fFriend
  genzaimu Opmerkingen
  
  Rapporteren als spam?
  
  100% GOOD (1 votes)
- VOEG een NIEUWE CORRECTIE TOE! - Titel
Zin 1
- I had a net friend.Until now, I still love him.But I will never see him again,because I deleted him last month.Both of us are in different country.
  Stem nu!
- I had a net friend. Until now, I still love him. But, I will never see him again, because I deleted him last month. Both of us are in a different country.
  genzaimu Opmerkingen
  
  Rapporteren als spam?
  
  100% GOOD (1 votes)
- VOEG een NIEUWE CORRECTIE TOE! - Zin 1
Zin 2
- I miss him very much.
  Stem nu!
- VOEG een NIEUWE CORRECTIE TOE! - Zin 2