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  • The ad Sony 4K Ultra HD

  • Sony.
  • Beauty of the perfection.
  • Beauty of the flawlessness Purity.
  • This ad boast a product for Sony.
  • For the Sony 4K Ultra HD And to lure customers, they use the ice bubbles, the winter, the music.
  • What is more purity than ice bubbles ?
  • Chat is more particular than the clearness of the bubbless ? The target ?
  • People where have money.
  • Peple have money to pay an another products of consumpltion.
  • And they urge this people do to buy notably with the music, where bost sales.
  • This musik in as interpretation off "Diamonds- Rihanna".
  • The singer is Hobbie Stuart.
  • And, a moment, he sings "when you hold me, I'm alive" during this moment, a little girl hold a bubble.
  • That's mean the clearness off the bubbles allow the live.
  • Sny 4K Ultra HD allow the live.
  • We can see, in this advert, only childs.
  • And Chils allow the live.
  • Ads make everything to boost a product.
  • And when people see the snow, the ice bubbles, hear a purity music...
  • They will buy this product.
  • I thing this advertisement is effective and catchy, but they forget this product is very expensive, and not all people can buy this.

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