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My mother say that I'm a thin girl, but I don't think so.
Sometimes I eat more than my husbend, my metabolism works well.
He hates milk porrige with fruits.
- When I was in Alaska in 2009 , I met a lot of broad-minded people which teached me that our world is not so easy,there are many wily, selfish people.

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- My mother say that I'm a thin girl, but I don't think so.
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- Sometimes I eat more than my husbend, my metabolism works well.
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- He hates milk porrige with fruits.
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- When I was in Alaska in 2009 , I met a lot of broad-minded people which teached me that our world is not so easy,there are many wily, selfish people.
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