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Text from RenaudV - English

  • Hi guys! I need you to take a look at my english resume. TY

  • Profile: Young, dynamic and highly motivated, graduate with a master’s degree in engineering and 4 experienced years as BtoB commercial engineer.
  • Looking for a new challenge working abroad in a similar position.
  • Possess helpful knowledge and skills to succeed in an ambitious company.
  • Educational Summary: Diplôme d’Ingénieur Génie Mécanique 2007-2010, Pierre ET Marie Curie Polytechnic school, Paris Equivalent to a Master’s Degree in mechanical Engineering, obtained with distinctions.
  • Main subject studied: Project management, commercial negotiation, physics and material science, mathematics, information and communication science, basic accounting and financial management, client portfolio management.
  • DUT Génie Mécanique et productique 2005-2007, Universitary Institute of Technology, Orléans Equivalent to a BTEC Higher National Diploma in mechanical Engineering and production automation.
  • Baccalauréat général, Série scientifique 2005, Equivalent to a A levels.
  • Professional strengths: Ability to persuade executives and business professionals Possess excellent analytical and communication skills Ability to determine success and failure of commercial enterprises In-depth knowledge of negotiation process and contract closing Ability to develop innovative strategies to optimize business activities In-depth knowledge in hospital environment, particularly in Operating Room activity Ability to provide valuable field information Ability to make a precise and added value reporting of activities Flexible and willing to travel according to requirement Professional Experience: BERNAS MEDICAL - (distributor of LUMENIS and DORNIER surgical laser), France Since April 2013 Commercial Engineer in charge of the Northern half of France Missions Responsible of a client portfolio composed of 350 installed equipment.
  • Responsible for gathering information from customers and field sales teams.
  • In charge to explore and develop business opportunities introducing innovating products to the market.
  • Planning and attending surgical events (ENT/Gynaecology/Neurosurgery/Aesthetic).
  • Achievements First French installation of LUMENIS CO2 laser system using fibre technology (European Hospital Georges Pompidou – Paris).
  • First French installation of FIAGON neuronavigation system (American Hospital – Neuilly/Seine).
  • Turnover 2013: 700K€ (Target: 650K€) Turnover 2014: 950K€ (Target: 750K€) LAMIDEY NOURY - (Manufacturing and commercialisation of electrosurgical generators and instruments), France 2010 to 2013 Commercial Engineer in charge of the central France Responsible of client portfolio development.
  • In charge to plane and attend surgical procedures in operating room (visceral, urology, gynaecology, orthopaedic) to convince surgeons.
  • Responsible of technical and economical project presentation to various hospital environment actors like surgeons, biomedical engineers, hospital pharmacists and financiers.
  • Provide an efficient reporting through a Customer Relationship Management software.
  • MORIA - (Manufacturing and commercialisation of ophthalmologic instruments), France 2007 to 2010 Junior project manager - Responsible of multiple research and development projects.
  • Main project: Developing a single-use instrument for cataract surgery (capsulhorexis forceps – able to work through a 1.8mm corneal incision).
  • In charge of managing development planning and scheduling from prototype conception to series production.
  • In charge to manage project costs satisfying the allocated global programme budget.
  • Responsible of pre-development tests with ophthalmologic surgeons.
  • References: Will be available upon request

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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    • Profile: Young, dynamic and highly motivated, graduate with a master’s degree in engineering and 4 experienced years as BtoB commercial engineer.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 1ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 1
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  • Frazo 4
    • Educational Summary: Diplôme d’Ingénieur Génie Mécanique 2007-2010, Pierre ET Marie Curie Polytechnic school, Paris Equivalent to a Master’s Degree in mechanical Engineering, obtained with distinctions.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 4ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 4
  • Frazo 5
    • Main subject studied: Project management, commercial negotiation, physics and material science, mathematics, information and communication science, basic accounting and financial management, client portfolio management.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 5ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 5
  • Frazo 6
    • DUT Génie Mécanique et productique 2005-2007, Universitary Institute of Technology, Orléans Equivalent to a BTEC Higher National Diploma in mechanical Engineering and production automation.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 6ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 6
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  • Frazo 8
    • Professional strengths: Ability to persuade executives and business professionals Possess excellent analytical and communication skills Ability to determine success and failure of commercial enterprises In-depth knowledge of negotiation process and contract closing Ability to develop innovative strategies to optimize business activities In-depth knowledge in hospital environment, particularly in Operating Room activity Ability to provide valuable field information Ability to make a precise and added value reporting of activities Flexible and willing to travel according to requirement Professional Experience: BERNAS MEDICAL - (distributor of LUMENIS and DORNIER surgical laser), France Since April 2013 Commercial Engineer in charge of the Northern half of France Missions Responsible of a client portfolio composed of 350 installed equipment.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 8ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 8
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  • Frazo 12
    • Achievements First French installation of LUMENIS CO2 laser system using fibre technology (European Hospital Georges Pompidou – Paris).
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 12ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 12
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  • Frazo 14
    • Turnover 2013: 700K€ (Target: 650K€) Turnover 2014: 950K€ (Target: 750K€) LAMIDEY NOURY - (Manufacturing and commercialisation of electrosurgical generators and instruments), France 2010 to 2013 Commercial Engineer in charge of the central France Responsible of client portfolio development.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 14ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 14
  • Frazo 15
    • In charge to plane and attend surgical procedures in operating room (visceral, urology, gynaecology, orthopaedic) to convince surgeons.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 15ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 15
  • Frazo 16
    • Responsible of technical and economical project presentation to various hospital environment actors like surgeons, biomedical engineers, hospital pharmacists and financiers.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 16ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 16
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  • Frazo 18
    • MORIA - (Manufacturing and commercialisation of ophthalmologic instruments), France 2007 to 2010 Junior project manager - Responsible of multiple research and development projects.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 18ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 18
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    • Main project: Developing a single-use instrument for cataract surgery (capsulhorexis forceps – able to work through a 1.8mm corneal incision).
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 19ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 19
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