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AUTA KORJAAMAAN NYT!korjattu

Text from vaness182 - English

  • February 23th.

    • Today is Saturday, February 23th.
    • Yesterday was 22th.
    • Yesterday was dificult do my homework because my bff Ivonne was sad.
  • I couldn't focus myself.
    • I don't pay attention, I love smile but yesterday I felt sad.
  • Sometimes, I let go with my emotions and the emotions of my friends.
    • When I fell sad, I chosen go to my bed and only be alone.
    • I don't know why, but the other night I watched a fight, but not box, if not, a fight of MMA.
    • Now, I want learn "Aikido".
    • for defend my baby jiji, I lying, always she save me, not fight, if not, she give to me her support.
    • This Afternoon, she sang me a lullaby in French then I lay down on the bed, and I sleep, was rare because I sleep only when I feel sick, but she did sleep me. when I woke up, I ate grape bread, and we watched the movie.
    • This morning I saw a photo and I changed myself, or better say, it renew my ideas and now I want do my dreams because the dreams aren't impossible.
  • But my personal phrase and the Xiomy is: "world of colors"

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English