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AUTA KORJAAMAAN NYT!korjaamaton

Text from duja - English

  • My Fantastic Holiday

  • My holiday to the USA was the best holiday I ever had.
    • I was so excited when I got on the airplane.
  • Our flight to Washington, DC was 16 continuous hours, but it wasn’t a boring trip.
  • We had so much fun talking with people from different cultures.
  • When we were about to land, I looked out of the window, and I saw the delightful, colorful airport lights.
  • The moment we arrived at the hotel, “Wow!” was the first word that came out of my mouth when I saw in front of the hotel that big round fountain that actually dances.
  • I couldn’t take my eyes off of it.
  • The next day we went to Chinatown, it was filled with the smell of Chinese food and the sound of different languages.
    • We had a really good experience exploring a new culture.
  • The next morning, we decided to go to Six Flags theme park.
  • When I got into the park, I took a moment to stare at this beautiful full-of-life place and listen to people’s screams while riding rollercoasters.
    • I had so much fun riding rollercoasters, and taking photos with clowns and funny characters.
  • Although it was a short holiday in Washington, DC, but it was equal a year of fun.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English