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  • What is my biggest weakness?

    • I consider as my biggest weakness the fact that sometimes I am too much concentrated on one thing and don't look for the opportunities around me.
    • For example I could apply for a job position a year ago but I was so concentrated on my studies that I didn't.
    • I am trying to adjust this weakness by thinking a bit more of what I will need to do in the future and not to concentrate so much only in the present.

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    • I consider as my biggest weakness the fact that sometimes I am too much concentrated on one thing and don't look for the opportunities around me.
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    • I consider asbelieve that my biggest weakness is the fact that I sometimes I amfocus too much concentrated on one thing and don't look foron one thing, which prevents me from seeing the opportunities around me.
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    • I consider asbelieve that my biggest weakness the factis that, sometimes, I am focusing too much concentrated on one thing and don't look for on one thing without looking at other opportunities around me.
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    • For example I could apply for a job position a year ago but I was so concentrated on my studies that I didn't.
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    • For example, I could apply for a job position a year ago but I was so concentrated on my studies that I didn't.
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    • For example, last year, I could have applyied for a job position a year ago but I was so concentrat, but I didn't because I was too focused on my studies that I didn't.
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    • I am trying to adjust this weakness by thinking a bit more of what I will need to do in the future and not to concentrate so much only in the present.
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    • I am trying to adjustbreak this weakness by thinking a bit more ofabout what I will need to do in the future and not to concentrateing so much only ion the present.
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    • I am trying to adjustget rid of this weakness by thinking a bit more ofabout what I will need to do in the future, and not to concentrate sby trying not to focus too much only in the present.
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