添削

添削のお手伝いをしましょう！修正済み

Kontrarianからのテキスト - English

  • What is my biggest weakness?

    • I consider as my biggest weakness the fact that sometimes I am too much concentrated on one thing and don't look for the opportunities around me.
    • For example I could apply for a job position a year ago but I was so concentrated on my studies that I didn't.
    • I am trying to adjust this weakness by thinking a bit more of what I will need to do in the future and not to concentrate so much only in the present.

添削の手助けをお願いします！ - English