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- Today, the sky is grey and there is a very cold wind from sibera.
- I want to watch a new movie on my computer or maybe to the cinema !
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- Today, 23 febrary.
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- Hi, i'm new here.
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- I am french, i live in Paris.
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- I am french, i live in Paris.¶¶French (nationalities and languages are capitalized).¶I (the only pronoun we always capitalize no matter the place in the sentence is je --> I ).
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- I want to speak better english !
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- I want to speak ~~better~~ english better!
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- I want to speak better english !¶¶You can say better English or English better...it is commonly said both ways.
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- Today, the sky is grey and there is a very cold wind from sibera.¶¶Siberia (countries/regions are capitalized. There is an "i" before the "a".
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- I want to watch a new movie on my computer or maybe to the cinema !
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- I want to watch a new movie on my computer or maybe to the cinema !¶¶We usually say movies instead of cinema, but it is understood if you say cinema.
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- I want to watch a new movie on my computer ~~or maybe to the cinema !~~.
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- I search someone for speak in english. Thanks !
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- I am searching for someone ~~for~~to speak in english with. Thanks !
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- I search someone for speak in english. Thanks !¶¶In one of the corrections Keivis has you to put with at the end of the sentence. In order to be grammatically correct, in English, we do not end sentences with a preposition.¶¶Correction: I am searching for someone with whom I can speak English.
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