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Text from LuanaRbcht - English

    • English redaction

    • Hello everybody, my name is Luna and I on BBC radio today for you speak about my kidnapping when I was little, I was only four years old but I remember everything.
    • It was a sunday, this day it was the day or everybody play outside.
    • The sun was present, good mood too, my mother made me a red dress and suddenly two vans have appeared and from this moment the drama was among in my life.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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    • Hello everybody, my name is Luna and I on BBC radio today for you speak about my kidnapping when I was little, I was only four years old but I remember everything.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • Hello everybody, my name is Luna and I am on BBC radio today for you to speak about my kidnapping when I was little,. I was only four years old, but I remember everything.
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    • Hello everybody, my name is Luna and I am on BBC radio today for you speakto speak to you about my kidnapping when I was little, I was only four years old then but I remember everything.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 1ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 1
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    • The sun was present, good mood too, my mother made me a red dress and suddenly two vans have appeared and from this moment the drama was among in my life.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • The sun was present, good mood too, my mother made me a red dress, and suddenly two vans have appeared andwhich from this moment the drama was among in my life.
      genzaimugenzaimu profile picture Kommentit 1
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • The sun was present, good mood too, my mother made me a red dress and s. Suddenly, two vans have appeared and from thisat moment on the drama was among inbecame part of my life.
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      0% GOOD (1 votes)
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 3