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    • My favourite comedy series

    • My favourite comedy series is "fizruk"(the teacher of PE )There are 20 episodes in it.It is about a young man who works in a school.
    • His name is Oleg.He teaches PE among senior pupils.
    • Before it he was a bodyguard in an influence businesscan with a criminal last life.
    • But his career as a bodyguard failed and he had to go to school,because a man he worked for earlier had a daughter and a good idea came to the teacher's of PE mind.
    • I forgot to say that Oleg was offended to businessman because he dismissed him from service.So he decides to be friends with businessman's daughter Sasha.
  • He tries to help her with her difficulties and to solve her problems.
    • In her turn she treateds him as to best friend.There are a lot of jokes and humorous moments in this comedy series,so I like it very much.

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    • My favourite comedy series is "fizruk"(the teacher of PE )There are 20 episodes in it.It is about a young man who works in a school.
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    • My favourite comedy series is "fizruk" (the teacher of PE ). There are 20 episodes in it. It is about a young man who works in a school.
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    • But his career as a bodyguard failed and he had to go to school,because a man he worked for earlier had a daughter and a good idea came to the teacher's of PE mind.
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    • But his career as a bodyguard failed and he had to go to school, because a man he worked for earlier had a daughter and a good idea came to the PE teacher's of PE mind.
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    • I forgot to say that Oleg was offended to businessman because he dismissed him from service.So he decides to be friends with businessman's daughter Sasha.
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    • I forgot to say that Oleg was offended toby the businessman because he dismissed him from service. So , he decides to be friends with the businessman's daughter, Sasha.
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    • In her turn she treateds him as to best friend.There are a lot of jokes and humorous moments in this comedy series,so I like it very much.
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    • In her turn she treateds him as to best friend.There are a lot of jokes and humorous moments in this comedy series, so I like it very much.
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