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- Please correct my english
What a touching video.
- Thought just a simple song by lil boy.
- But for a moment I felt my emotional being was triggered by this sad story and yet so inspirational.
- Im so grateful for the love, support & understanding that i receive everyday from my family ❤️

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- Please correct my english
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- Please correct my eEnglish.
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- What a touching video.
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câu 2
- Thought just a simple song by lil boy.
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- TI thought this was just a simple song by ~~lil~~a little boy.
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- But for a moment I felt my emotional being was triggered by this sad story and yet so inspirational.
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- ~~But f~~For a moment I felt my emotional being ~~was~~had been triggered by this sad ~~story and yet so~~yet inspirational. story.
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- Im so grateful for the love, support & understanding that i receive everyday from my family ❤️
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- I'm so grateful for the love, support &and understanding that iI receive everyday from my family. ❤️
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