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    • My travel summary in Morocco

    • Last week, I was going to my native country from Paris to Casablanca in Saturady afternoon, the trip duration was three houss less fifteen minutes.
    • The first things how i noticed in my arrived, it's the weather it was very Hote in Morocco, in spite of the mounth of the years,even Morrocain are remark the somthing.
    • The goal of my travel is; firstly was to visiting my famelly, secondly was the relegion holyday( aid Al ADHA) it's the biggest and the moste important in Morocco.i was feeling welcome all time with my famely and my freinds, all people was very freindly with me.
    • I will be never forgete this trip,i learned that the life is so short to live so far from my parents and people how love me, in spite of some problem in Morocco especially in education, health, and public service.

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    • The first things how i noticed in my arrived, it's the weather it was very Hote in Morocco, in spite of the mounth of the years,even Morrocain are remark the somthing.
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    • The first things how i I've noticed inafter my arrived, it's the weatheral to Morocco was that it was very Hhote in Morocco there, in spite of the mounth of the years,season, even the Morrocain are remark the somthingns / the locals were surprised about it .
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    • The goal of my travel is; firstly was to visiting my famelly, secondly was the relegion holyday( aid Al ADHA) it's the biggest and the moste important in Morocco.i was feeling welcome all time with my famely and my freinds, all people was very freindly with me.
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    • The goals of my travel is;were: firstly was to, visiting my famelly, ily;¶secondly was, the releigionus holyiday( a Eid Al ADHA) it's -Adha (the biggest and the moste important one in Morocco.i was feeling ). I felt welcome allt any time with my fameily and my freiends, all people wasere very freiendly with me.
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    • I will be never forgete this trip,i learned that the life is so short to live so far from my parents and people how love me, in spite of some problem in Morocco especially in education, health, and public service.
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    • I will be never forgete this trip,i I've learned that the life is so short to live it so far from my parents and people whow love me, in spite of some problems in Morocco, especially inthose with education, healthcare, and public service. ¶
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