Pataisymai

Text from RawabiHR - English

  • Should child athletes be pushed hard in order to successed

  • Success in life is very important thing because the people without success don't work any thing.
  • If the children to be a success, when you pushed into sports.
  • firstly, children should do sports because the body is strong when they move all the body for example swimming.
  • (complete) moreover, good health is become when people do sports such as, play football because children run every day for a long time.
  • (complete) finally, children they can teach protect them selves, when do sports for instance karate.
  • (complete) in concluding, i think that children doing sports successful because they strong bode, good health and protect themselves.

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