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    • being survivor in Titanic

    • The great ship, Titanic sailed for New York from Southampton on April 10th, 1912.
    • I was one of the survivors of 707.
  • The 46,000 ton Titanic was a colossal ship and carried more than 2,200 passengers and crew.
    • Titanic was not only the largest ship that had been built, but also was regarded as unsinkable, for she had sixteen watertight compartments.
  • Even if two of these were flooded, she would still be able to float.
    • She went down on her first voyage with heave loss of life.
    • I will never forget the Titanic sinking of this great liner.
    • At that time, we had setting out for four days.
    • While the Titanic was sailing across the icy water of the North Atlantic, huge iceberg was spotted by a lookout.
    • I heard the alarm went off when I was approaching the deck.
    • I ran to the deck quickly.
    • The great ship turned sharply to avoid a direct collision just in time, narrowly missing the immense walk of ice which rose over 100 feet out of the water beside her.
    • Passengers did not notice that there was a trembling sound from below and enjoy their party.
  • The captain went down to see what had happened.
    • Captain found that the ship had been damaged.
    • Some of crew said loudly that five of her sixteen compartments had already been flooded.
    • I realized our horror that the Titanic would be sunk rapidly.
    • I was lucky and found a lifeboat that could carry one more person, I board lifeboat smoothly.
    • The order to abandon ship was given and hundred of people plunged into the icy water.
  • As there were not enough lifeboats for everybody, 1500 lives were lost.

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