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Text from Boehre - English

  • The Consumer Society

    • In the period before the industrial revolution the consumer appreciate long live products witch also can use from the following generation.
    • As the industrial revolution starts this point of view changed to a consumption patters witch is living from a buy and waste consumer.
    • It isn't necessary any more that produces live a lifetime and it is also not necessary that products live only on generation.
    • This development is grown up by the rinsing incomes and mind changing of the society.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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  • Lause 1
    • In the period before the industrial revolution the consumer appreciate long live products witch also can use from the following generation.
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    • In the period before the industrial revolution the consumer appreciated long live products whitch also can be used from the following generation.
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  • Lause 2
    • As the industrial revolution starts this point of view changed to a consumption patters witch is living from a buy and waste consumer.
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    • As the industrial revolution startsed this point of view changed to a consumption pattersn whitch is consumers living from a buying and waste consumering.
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  • Lause 3
    • It isn't necessary any more that produces live a lifetime and it is also not necessary that products live only on generation.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • It isn't necessary any more that producets lsurvive a lifetime and it is also not necessary that products live only one generation.
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