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  • Thank you for your correction 1: school activities

  • Working as a student assistant was really a valuable experience.
    • Beside dairy affairs which taught me to act responsibly and improved my communication skill, student assistants were also in charge of student’s activities.
    • It was a creative work while it trained my leadership.
  • I obtained this opportunity to work as a laboratory assistant by accident.
    • The professor needed several students completing her research by testing the efficiency of a new flotation reagent.
    • To achieve this mission, much patience and the cooperation with teammates were required.
    • We commenced by setting time schedule and goals under the professor’s help.
    • We discussed the results after experiment to improve our test method.
  • As a result, the mission had accomplished in advance.
  • During my last school holiday at college, I got an opportunity to work as apprentice in a finace department.
  • It was the first time I got in touch with finance work and it provided opportunities to gain finance knowledge.
  • At the beginning, I encountered a little difficulty which is that the bills I wrote were always refused by the bank because of the careless handwriting.
    • After the training of the tellers, I can handle daily accounting job.
    • Their kindness and rigorous working attitude moved me a lot.

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