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    • I like doing some small business from childhood

  • I remember that I sold postcards to my classmates when I was in primary school, then some accessories during senior high school.
    • I started my first store at college.
    • Because of lacking experience, I didn’t sign a contract with landlord so that she took back the shore after one month I had started.
    • It seemed like my business would finish and all the money I invested would walk off into sunset, but I succeeded in overcoming this difficulty.
    • I collaborated with the next door, share the place and share the interest.
    • Even though I didn’t earn much money that time, but I proved myself and turned a negative situation to positive.
  • I think it was my greatest achievement other than academic success.
    • I think one of my strength is the strong learning ability.
    • After obtained my diploma this February, I was searching for a job, but unfortunately, I found nothing to date.
    • I worked in a Chinese restaurant as witness to pay the bills.
    • Even like this, I found I learned a lot, for example, how to service people, how to communicate with clients and how to improve my service quality.
  • Moreover, I helped my boss translate and deal with some business documents.
    • Through this, I learned how to start a business and what documents are necessary.

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