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    • a motivation letter

    • z is one of largest banks in the work, the financial service founded all over the world.
    • Be to a specialist banker is my dream even though I have an engineering background.
    • I continue to learn the financial knowledge by myself to improve my skill, for example, reading books concerned such as ‘’Security Analyst’’ by Benjamin Graham, it helps me a lot and the content really attractive.
    • I also plan to pass CFA examination next year.
    • But I think it’s far from enough, to be a banker, the knowledge is important, but the experience is equally important.
    • This Programme provides an overview of banking industry knowledge, build analytical decision-making capabilities as well as management skills.
  • I trust z’s ability and I trust myself.
    • As a Chinese student who got master in engineer in France, I hope to use my multicultural and engineering background inject to this programme, to z with full my passion.

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    • I continue to learn the financial knowledge by myself to improve my skill, for example, reading books concerned such as ‘’Security Analyst’’ by Benjamin Graham, it helps me a lot and the content really attractive.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I continue to learn the financial knowledge by myself to improve my skill, f. For example, reading books concerned such as ‘’Security Analyst’’ by Benjamin Graham, it helps me a lot and the content is really attractive.
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      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
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    • But I think it’s far from enough, to be a banker, the knowledge is important, but the experience is equally important.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • But I think it’'s far from enough, to be a banker, -the knowledge is important, but the experience is equally important.
      genzaimugenzaimu profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5
  • câu 6
    • This Programme provides an overview of banking industry knowledge, build analytical decision-making capabilities as well as management skills.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • This Pprogramme provides an overview of banking industry knowledge, build analytical decision-making capabilities as well as management skills.
      genzaimugenzaimu profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6
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    • As a Chinese student who got master in engineer in France, I hope to use my multicultural and engineering background inject to this programme, to z with full my passion.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • As a Chinese student who got a master's degree in engineer in France, I hope to use my multicultural and engineering background injecto to this programme, to z with full my passion.
      genzaimugenzaimu profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8