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    • The WOMAD festival

  • Dear Mary, Great to hear from you.
  • I hope you are fine.
    • I have an exciting news to share with you.
  • This summer was very eventful for me.
    • At first, I have improve my English by visiting the linguistic camp.
  • It was very interesting.
  • Secondly, I have visited my granny, who lives in Moscow.
    • But the most important thing is that I was lucky enough to be invited to the WOMAD festival, which took place in Bristol Zoo in the UK.
    • The opening of the fest was held on 22-nd of July.
  • I went there with my best friend Natasha and with her father.
  • I must say that it was a great opportunity to listen to talented singers and musicians as well as broaden my horizon.
    • We arrived to London on 21-st of July in the morning and spent some time there, enjoying the local sights.
    • After that we took a train to Bristol.
    • As we drifted away from London the weather has changed and fine rain has begun.
  • But still the weather was nice.
    • It was a warm summer day and the light summer brezze was blewing.
    • There were a lot of people in front of the zoo and in zoo itself.
  • Music lovers from all over the globe have come to enjoy the atmosphere of brotherhood.
    • It was really interesting to watch how people from different countries exchanging an impressions and their musical experience, swapping stories and just having a good time together.
  • There were many workshops, where children and adults learned songs and dances of different nations of the world.
  • There were also a lot of stalls, selling hand-crafted souvenirs and other goods.
  • But the most memorable event was the concert itself.
  • Musicians played music of different genres: soul, jazz, rock, funk and so on.
  • I liked the band of folk-rockers from Belgium.
    • They made an exiting performance.
    • When we left the WOMAD festival I felt sad, but, at the same time, it was wonderfull to take part in such a unique occasion, to understand cultures of other countries, through the enjoyment of music.
    • So, I got many wonderfull memories, that I'll cherish forever.
    • Write back soon.
    • Best of Luck, Margaret.

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