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my daily routine
- I always get up at 7 o'clock,wash my face,dressed am in school.
- During the day I am in school.
- After school I go home,eat dinner,do lessons and go to the gym.
- In the evening I usually rest.
- Play computer games or watch TV.

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- my daily routine
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câu 1
- I always get up at 7 o'clock,wash my face,dressed am in school.
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- I always get up at 7 o'clock,I wash my face,~~dressed am in~~ and dress to get ready for school.
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câu 2
- During the day I am in school.
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- ~~During the day I am in school~~I am at school during the day.
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câu 3
- After school I go home,eat dinner,do lessons and go to the gym.
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- ~~After~~When I finish school I go home,~~eat dinner,do lessons and~~and have dinner. Then I do my homework, and after that I go to the gym.
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- In the evening I usually rest.
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- I~~n the evening I usually rest~~ am usually resting in the evenings.
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câu 5
- Play computer games or watch TV.
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- PI watch tv and play computer games ~~or watch TV~~.
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