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the american dream
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- Thank you :) The role of celebrities is to keep the American Dream alive.
- Discuss -For the great majority of people, they hope always the American Dream.
- This is the social success in America even if there is an important rate of poverty.
- How and why could celebrity keep the American Dream alive ?
- Firstly, we must point out that in America there is a gap between rich and poor.
- A lot of immigrant come to America in order to improve their living conditions.
- They believe at the America Dream.
- Why many people believe always at the America Dream ?
- This is thanks to famous people.
- Indeed, there are celebtity who have succeeded.
- These are showing their social success via the media like Internet (Facebook, etc...) , or TV show.
- They tell their way before their success.
- Thus, many people in America or immigrant think that a similar story could them happened.
- It should be remembered that this is a Dream.
- And it's scarce like situation.
- There is also a seamy side.
- In addition, many people, who really want this, can lose happiness because this American Dream is just an illusion.
- And they have to do facing many life problems.
- To conclude, the America Dream for many people is just a dream and not a reality.
- But the success of some people can give a few of hope, and this may people help in order to live.
- In my opinion, the America Dream is difficult to reach it.
- Time will tell whether there will be other people who suceed with nothing. 239 words
- AurelieyeahAugust 2014100% GOOD (1 votes)
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