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ΒΟΗΘΗΣΤΕ ΝΑ ΔΙΟΡΘΩΣΟΥΜΕ ΤΩΡΑ!Αδιόρθωτος

Κείμενο από Darina1997 - English

  • please check my mistakes Thank you in advance

  • However, it wasn't this way.
  • In a minute Ariman raised himself flew up to the elephant's back and sank his teeth deeply into its throat.
    • Beside itself with pain, elephant tried to get rid of its enemy but in vain.
    • Its strength was decreasing, it began sinking to the floor.
  • And bow gunners were running away.
    • After Aramin took a short rest, a great lion named after the prince of light Ormuzd was led out to the arena.
  • People wanted to throw a live lamb to the beasts but it was not for princess Lindagul's eye (it was sight not for princess Lindagul) who had already got a pretty good look at those bloody sights.
  • She waved her hand: a little trebling trembling lamb was saved and a dead dog was thrown to the predators instead.
  • The hungry lion threw itself on the picking.
  • The tiger was full because it had drunk elephant's blood but envious by its nature it trew itself forward as well.
  • Ozmud and Ariman got engaged (in the fight) with each other, the prince of light and the prince of dark(ness).
  • All the environs echoed their awful roar, the sand whirled scattered by their paws and was being stained with their blood.
  • The conclusion of the battle was unknown for a long time, but finally the lion got on the top of the tiger and tore its chest.
  • Ariman was dead.
  • Ormuz was lwd out of the arena with triumph

ΠΑΡΑΚΑΛΟΥΜΕ, ΒΟΗΘΗΣΤΕ ΝΑ ΔΙΟΡΘΩΣΟΥΜΕ ΚΑΘΕ ΠΡΟΤΑΣΗ! - English