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  • Name: Rawan ....
  • D.O.B: 04-08-1995 E-mail: .... Phone:.....
    • Dear Sir/ Madam, My name is Rawan ....., 19 years old, I was born in 04-08-1995 in Syria, where I studied all stages of school education there except third grade secondary, which I completed it in Saudi Arabia as a result of war in Syria,and I succeeded by 100%.
    • I would like to complete my university studies in Germany to obtain a bachelor's degree in Chemistry (where I got an invitation for the entrance exam in the Py of Karlsruhe Institute,which will be on 02-09-2014 ), as Germany is one of the most advanced countries in the World in the field of education,where occupies third place globally in terms of the number of Nobel prizes awarded more than 100,almost 30 of them are in Chemistry,and occupies the first place in Europa in terms of the number of patents.
    • Germany supports science and cooperate with the students and give them several facilities, in addition to appropriate university fees,so the students have been able to continue their studies and research without having to worry about tuition fees.
    • Merit is the most important criteria for admission away from race,gender,religion and social class.
    • Also,Germany universities allow me to Continue my education at the standard and the educational approach which I aspire to it, That can help me to be able to contribute to the progress of my country again and offer something important to this World.
    • Featuring Germany as a country of multicultural,which help me to expand my horizons of scientific and intellectual, in addition to the friendly and cooperative people.
    • From the smallest thing to the most important issues in our world, Chemistry exist, even in the air we breath, beacuse of this and because I am keen at obtaining more knowledge and contributing to new discoveries and am interested in particular in the ability of Chemistry to transform the basic elements in nature to important industries, can do not without them because they make life easier and better, I choose Chemistry an addition, there are many career choices open to me.
    • After completing my study, I plan to return to the Homeland Syria because it really needs us.
    • Thank you very much in advance for your help and I would be very pleased if you support me in my decision to study in German.
  • Yours faithfully, Rowan ....
  • If there are any corrections or suggestions for the formulation of better, please help

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    • Dear Sir/ Madam, My name is Rawan ....., 19 years old, I was born in 04-08-1995 in Syria, where I studied all stages of school education there except third grade secondary, which I completed it in Saudi Arabia as a result of war in Syria,and I succeeded by 100%.
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    • Dear Sir/ Madam,¶My name is Rawan ....., 19I am nineteen years old, and I was born ion 04-08-the 4th of August 1995 in Syria, where I studied all stages of school education there except third grade secondary, which I completed it in Saudi Arabia as a result of war in Syria,and I succeeded by 100%completed my primary and lower secondary education. However, I had to move to Saudi Arabia in order to complete my upper secondary education due to the war in Syria.
    • AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 3AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 3
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    • I would like to complete my university studies in Germany to obtain a bachelor's degree in Chemistry (where I got an invitation for the entrance exam in the Py of Karlsruhe Institute,which will be on 02-09-2014 ), as Germany is one of the most advanced countries in the World in the field of education,where occupies third place globally in terms of the number of Nobel prizes awarded more than 100,almost 30 of them are in Chemistry,and occupies the first place in Europa in terms of the number of patents.
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    • I would like to complete my university studies in Germany, to obtain a bachelor's degree in Chemistry (where I got an invitation for the entrance exam in the Py of Karlsruhe Institute,which will b. I plan on obtaining a bachelor's degree oin 02-09-2014 )Chemistry, as Germany is one of the most advanced countries in the Wworld in the field of education,where occupies. It is ranked third place globally in terms of the number of Nobel prizes awarded more than 100,almost 30 of them are in Chemistry,and occupies the first place in Europa, around one third of which are in the field of Chemistry. Germany is also top ranked in terms of the number of patents awarded.
    • AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 4AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 4
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    • Germany supports science and cooperate with the students and give them several facilities, in addition to appropriate university fees,so the students have been able to continue their studies and research without having to worry about tuition fees.
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    • Germany supports science and coope, collaborates with theuniversity students and gives them several facilities, in addition to appropriatffordable university fees, so the students have beenare able to continue their studies and research without having to worry about tuition fees.
    • AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 5AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 5
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    • Also,Germany universities allow me to Continue my education at the standard and the educational approach which I aspire to it, That can help me to be able to contribute to the progress of my country again and offer something important to this World.
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    • Also,I believe that Germany universities allow me to Continue my education at theoffer a high standard and theof educational approach which I aspire to it, That can help me to be able to, which can help me contribute to the progress of my country again and offer something important to this Wworld.
    • AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 7AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 7
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    • Featuring Germany as a country of multicultural,which help me to expand my horizons of scientific and intellectual, in addition to the friendly and cooperative people.
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    • Featuring Germany ais a country of multicultural,which country, which will help me to expandbroaden my horizons of scientific and intellectual, in addition to the friendly and cooperative, as well as meet new people.
    • AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 8AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 8
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    • From the smallest thing to the most important issues in our world, Chemistry exist, even in the air we breath, beacuse of this and because I am keen at obtaining more knowledge and contributing to new discoveries and am interested in particular in the ability of Chemistry to transform the basic elements in nature to important industries, can do not without them because they make life easier and better, I choose Chemistry an addition, there are many career choices open to me.
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    • From the smallest things to the most important issues in our world, Chemistry exis present, even in the air we breath, beacuse of this and because e. ¶I am keen aton obtaining more knowledge and contributing to new discoveries and am interested in particularbecause of this. I am particularly interested in the ability of Chemistry to transform the basic elements in nature to important industries, can do not without them because they make life easier and better,¶I choose Chemistry¶an addition, there are.¶A degree in Chemistry also leaves me open to many career choices open to me.
    • AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 9AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 9
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