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- Abut me
- My name is H , i am 18 years old, i like play football, viduo game and swming.
- My languge mother arabic and i'm very good it But my english longueg is bad becouse all time study i'm sik And i'm very sad and i will good in english

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- Abut me
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- About me
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- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Title
Ayat 1
- My name is H , i am 18 years old, i like play football, viduo game and swming.
  Undi sekarang!
- My name is H , iI am 18 years old, iI like playing football, and vidueo games, and swimming as well.
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- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 1
Ayat 2
- My languge mother arabic and i'm very good it But my english longueg is bad becouse all time study i'm sik And i'm very sad and i will good in english
  Undi sekarang!
- My ~~languge mother a~~mother tongue is Arabic and iI'm very good at it. ¶But my eEnglish ~~longueg~~ is bad becoause all the time I study iI'm si~~k ¶And i~~ck. ¶I'm very sad and ~~i will good in e~~I hope that I will be much better at English.
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- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 2