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  • Memories

    • when I go back with my memories to the past, when i was a kid, i felt that there were so many of things, i had to explore it.
    • and everything it was bound to be a big adventure, and exciting, but i felt like a tiny drop of water in a big ocean. i could hardly wait to see my new kitten, i asked nervously " where is she?" i saw my parents that they pointed to a little box it was laying on the floor.
    • slowly i walked to it, suddenly afraid to look into the box.
    • my parents felt that i was afraid.
    • and they started to say a nice words to encourage me, their words like a magic spell on me, and i opened the box and looked at it, there was something very tiny, but it was so beautiful and so soft, it was white and her eyes was blue.
    • when i hold her she was licking herself. and i started to laugh without any reason.
    • that memories are drawing a big smile on our faces, keep it always positive.

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  • Frazo 1
    • when I go back with my memories to the past, when i was a kid, i felt that there were so many of things, i had to explore it.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • wWhen I go back withto my memories tof the past, from when iI was a kid, i I feelt that there were so many of things, i had to explore it.
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      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 1ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 1
  • Frazo 2
    • and everything it was bound to be a big adventure, and exciting, but i felt like a tiny drop of water in a big ocean. i could hardly wait to see my new kitten, i asked nervously " where is she?" i saw my parents that they pointed to a little box it was laying on the floor.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ¶and eEverything it was bound to be a big adventure, and of excitingement, but iI felt like a tiny drop of water in a bign enormous ocean. iI could hardly wait to see my new kitten, iI asked nervously " where is she?"¶iI saw that my parents that they pointed to a little box ithat was laying on the floor.
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      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 2ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 2
  • Frazo 3
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  • Frazo 5
    • and they started to say a nice words to encourage me, their words like a magic spell on me, and i opened the box and looked at it, there was something very tiny, but it was so beautiful and so soft, it was white and her eyes was blue.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • andSo they started to say a nice words to encourage me, their words were like a magic spell on me, and iI opened the box and looked at itto see her, there was something very tiny, but it was so beautiful and so soft, it was white and her eyes wasere blue.
      Mazzy_SMazzy_S profile picture Comments
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 5ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 5
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  • Frazo 7