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About Using Computer by Children
- Using computer have several positive and negative effects, it depends on how we are using it.
- First of all, let us define what the computer is?
- It is electric device doing a lot of calculation and functions to be used in several fields like sciences.
- Manufacturing and technology.
- Moreover, now a days it has different shapes like tablets and smart phones in somehow.
- Children common use of the computer is learning, they are using it to read or see a demonstration about their lessons in interactive way.
- As an example, my son learns about volcano in small video, and you can imagine that how many papers we have to write and draw, if we are using traditional books.
- Other usage is entertainment, children also are playing games on their computers.
- As I see children of my brother in low always watching movies on their computers.
- Depends on the previous, we recognize that, there is a positive and negative effects for using computer children.
- I think, it is better this using to be monitored by parents or teachers, so we get the most useful using.
- Parents can put rules for using computer like timing, so they can offer specific time for using computer for entertainment.
- In conclusion, in my point of view I am totally agree using computer has many positive effects rather than negative on my children, so I encourage them to use it and always advise them to use it in correct way.
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