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Hello everyone, I'm Olivier, I am 40 years old and lives near Lyon in France.
- I try to improve my english (beginner +) and correspond with people in chat, video and other.
- I have a family consisting of a wife and two children.
- I am engineer in network structure.
I love London and I go there once a year.
- see you soon ! olivier

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- Hello everyone, I'm Olivier, I am 40 years old and lives near Lyon in France.
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- I try to improve my english (beginner +) and correspond with people in chat, video and other.
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- I try to improve my eEnglish (beginner +) and correspond with people inthrough chats, videos and other means.
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- I have a family consisting of a wife and two children.
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- I am engineer in network structure.
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- I am an engineer in network structure.
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- I love London and I go there once a year.
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- see you soon ! olivier
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