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- Hello.
- Hi! I'm Marina. I from Russia.
- I love USA and UK, because I want speak English.
- I love sports and dance. It is fun.
- I favourite food is sushi, it is yummy.
- I like read a books.
- I want come to New York or London.
- I lean English in school.
- My teacher bad teaching. ;) Goodbye.

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- Hello.
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- Hello.
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- Hi! I'm Marina. I from Russia.
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- Hi! I'm Marina. I'm (I am) from Russia.
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- Hi! I'm Marina. I am from Russia.
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- Hi! I'm Marina. I'm from Russia.
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- I love USA and UK, because I want speak English.
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- I love the USA and ~~UK, because~~the UK, that's why I want to speak English.
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- I love USA and UK, because I want to speak English.
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- I love both the USA and UK, because I want to speak English.
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- I love sports and dance. It is fun.
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- I love sports and dance. because It is very funny.
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- I love sports and dance~~. It is~~ because they're very fun.
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- I love sports and dance~~. It is~~ because they're both very fun.
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- I favourite food is sushi, it is yummy.
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- IMy favourite food is sushi, it is yummy.
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- IMy favourite food is sushi, it is very yummy.(It is yummy is a french word)
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- IMy favourite food is sushi, it is yummy.
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- IMy favourite food is sushi, ~~it is~~because it's very yummy.
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- IMy favourite food is sushi, because it is yummy.
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- I like read a books.
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- I like to read a books.
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- I want come to New York or London.
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- I want to come to New York or London.
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- I want ~~come~~to go to New York or London.
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- I want to come to New York or London.
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- I lean English in school.
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- I learn English in school.
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- My teacher bad teaching. ;) Goodbye.
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- My teacher ~~bad~~is bad at teaching. ;) Goodbye.
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