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Hello
- So, my name is Salma, and I really want to improve my english, because in my opinion it's the most beautiful languge !
- I can express my ideas, people can understand what I am saying, but I want more, I want to speak it fluently with a good pronounciation, I hope that I will find what I need here, goodbye

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- Hello
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- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Title
Ayat 1
- So, my name is Salma, and I really want to improve my english, because in my opinion it's the most beautiful languge !
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- So, my name is Salma, and I really want to improve my eEnglish~~, because i~~. In my opinion, it's the most beautiful language !
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- ~~So, m~~My name is Salma, and I really want to improve my eEnglish, because in my opinion, it's the most beautiful language !
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- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 1
Ayat 2
- I can express my ideas, people can understand what I am saying, but I want more, I want to speak it fluently with a good pronounciation, I hope that I will find what I need here, goodbye
  Undi sekarang!
- I can express my ideas, people can understand what I am saying, but I want more, I want to speak it fluently with a good pronounciation,. I hope that I will find what I ~~need~~want here~~, g~~. Goodbye.
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- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 2