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  • June 25th.

  • Today is Wednesday, June 25th.
    • Days before, I came back home, I feel so glad, so happy, because I see again my family, my parents and my brothers.
  • Since I came back, I eat some things that like to me, also I've cooked with my mom all things that like to me and some things that don't like to me but I need for get vitamins.
  • I love the anime, all nights with my brothers, we will watching "detective conan" .
    • My daddy and me watch together the world cup, I like the soccer, and I contagious the happy to my little cousin.

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    • Days before, I came back home, I feel so glad, so happy, because I see again my family, my parents and my brothers.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • Days before, I came backA few days ago, I returned home, I feelam so glad, so happy, because I see again my family,because I get to see my family again, especially my parents and my brothers.
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    • Since I came back, I eat some things that like to me, also I've cooked with my mom all things that like to me and some things that don't like to me but I need for get vitamins.
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    • My daddy and me watch together the world cup, I like the soccer, and I contagious the happy to my little cousin.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • My daddy and meI watch togethered the wWorld cCup, together. I like the soccer, and I contagious the happy tomake my little cousin happy. ¶
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