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    • Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing in connection with my accommodation problems.
    • As I am facing many problems with student who share accommodation with me, I would like to summarize it as the following: Firstly,as he comes from a warm area in contrast with me,he likes to keep air conditioner at lowest degree which make me feel uncomfortable with.
    • Secondly,as he is studying music and me mathematics,he needs to keep training on his instruments with his colleagues which made me unable to focus on my studies due to high volume of instruments and interruptions.
    • Thirdly,as I mentioned before he speaks different language than me,that is make impossible to communicate with him in proper way.
    • Finally,I prefer to get another accommodation that could solve these problems at the earliest,so I can get focused on my lessons.
    • Sincerely, Ahmad

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  • Sententia 1
    • Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing in connection with my accommodation problems.
      Elige nunc !
    • Dear Sir/Madam,¶¶ I am writing in connection with myhaving difficulty with my current living situation, my studies are being negatively impacted, and I am seeking an immediate change in accommodation problems.
    • ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 1ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 1
  • Sententia 2
    • As I am facing many problems with student who share accommodation with me, I would like to summarize it as the following: Firstly,as he comes from a warm area in contrast with me,he likes to keep air conditioner at lowest degree which make me feel uncomfortable with.
      Elige nunc !
    • As I am facing many problems with student who share accommodation with me, I would like to summarize it as the following:¶¶ Firstly,as he comes from a warm area in contrast with me,he likes to keepFirst, my roommate sets the air conditioner at lowest degreesetting which makes me feelphysically uncomfortable with.
    • ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 2ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 2
  • Sententia 3
    • Secondly,as he is studying music and me mathematics,he needs to keep training on his instruments with his colleagues which made me unable to focus on my studies due to high volume of instruments and interruptions.
      Elige nunc !
    • Secondly,as he is studying music and me mathematics,he needs to keep training on his instruments with his colleagues which made me unable to focus on my studies due to high volume of instruments and interrup, I study mathematics, and I must have quiet to be able to focus on my studies. My roommate studies music, and the level of the sound from his instruments is very disruptive. His friends also visit regularly which poses additional distractions.
    • ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 3ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 3
  • Sententia 4
    • Thirdly,as I mentioned before he speaks different language than me,that is make impossible to communicate with him in proper way.
      Elige nunc !
    • Thirdly,as I mentioned before heAdditionally, my roommate and I speaks different language than me,that is make impossible to communicate with him in proper ways and are having difficulty communicating. I have tried discussing my needs with him without success.
    • ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 4ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 4
  • Sententia 5
    • Finally,I prefer to get another accommodation that could solve these problems at the earliest,so I can get focused on my lessons.
      Elige nunc !
    • Finally,I prefer to get another accommodation that could solve these problems at the earliest,so I can get focused on my lessonsor these reasons, I am requesting to be moved to a different room as soon as possible. I have done my best to resolve the situation, and to be a successful student, I need to have a conducive living environment.
    • ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 5ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 5
  • Sententia 6