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IELTS task

• Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing in connection with my accommodation problems.

• As I am facing many problems with student who share accommodation with me, I would like to summarize it as the following: Firstly,as he comes from a warm area in contrast with me,he likes to keep air conditioner at lowest degree which make me feel uncomfortable with.

• Secondly,as he is studying music and me mathematics,he needs to keep training on his instruments with his colleagues which made me unable to focus on my studies due to high volume of instruments and interruptions.

• Thirdly,as I mentioned before he speaks different language than me,that is make impossible to communicate with him in proper way.

• Finally,I prefer to get another accommodation that could solve these problems at the earliest,so I can get focused on my lessons.

• Sincerely, Ahmad