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  • The diagram presents a potential way of generating the electricity by using compost.
  • The process of electricity production requires various equipment and consists of several stages.
  • To produce the electricity by using compost it is needed a large steel tank three fourth filled with leaves, food scraps and water.
  • Being fermented from rotten compounds methane gas goes to the gas storage.
  • After coming to the storage methane gas enters into the compressor.
  • At this stage, having been compressed, gas passes through the pipes into combustion engine where it is transformed to mechanical energy.
  • Finally, passing through the generator, mechanical energy turns into electrical energy and comes to energy storage or battery which can be used for any electrical equipment.
  • To conclude, this method of producing energy isn`t appropriate for people living in the cities and can be potentially used in rural areas.
  • However, this method of generating electricity is ecologically-friendly as it successfully solve the problem of rubbish recycling.

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    • To produce the electricity by using compost it is needed a large steel tank three fourth filled with leaves, food scraps and water.
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    • At this stage, having been compressed, gas passes through the pipes into combustion engine where it is transformed to mechanical energy.
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    • Finally, passing through the generator, mechanical energy turns into electrical energy and comes to energy storage or battery which can be used for any electrical equipment.
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    • To conclude, this method of producing energy isn`t appropriate for people living in the cities and can be potentially used in rural areas.
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    • However, this method of generating electricity is ecologically-friendly as it successfully solve the problem of rubbish recycling.
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