Text from Madamequi - English
Dear Diary,
- I would not except such a party.
- I believed that we were going to stay a few hours in, toke some drinks, discuss as adults do.
- Truth is, we acted so crazy that I barely remember the all night.
- Jamie was waiting for us in front of the grand Peabody Hotel, wearing a class black smoking.
- as he told us 'it was a chic and nice place to get some fun'.
- Jamie used to go there twice a week, whereas it was my first time to go on a party so I felt a little stressful.
- I choose my best black dress who 'makes me look like a model' according to Henry, who just weared a white skirt and a black pant which I assume didn't fit together.
- The place was full of rich people.
- As I was looking at them, I started to wondering if we were rich people also.
- When we met Jamie, he gave me a look that I will never forget.
- This kind of look which mean 'If I wanted you, you could be mine'.
- I must had dream, because he looked so close to Henry that he would never mean to hurt him stealing his wife, and so am I.
- I would definitely never ever cheat on him with his brother.
- So I just forgot about this mysterious gaze and we took some drinks, sat, but nobody talk, as we were too sky to ask for dance.
- Then Jamie broke 'the silent' (not really silent when you considering how loud was the music). "We go dance ?
- I love this song, come on guys !
- Let me show you some moves'.
- He didn't let us answering and took our hand, and just in a cuple of seconds I was on the dance floor, barely move my body, afraid by the idea that my mum, who never wanted me to party, see me.
- Then, I heard Henry next to my ear ' I'm going to smoke a cigarette outside, I'll be right back in a minute' And just thirty seconds next, Jamie was getting closer and closer to me, grinning at me and just screamed ' Let go yourself !
- Don't you enjoy the party?!' And he is was right.
- Why was I felt so nervous and intimidated by him, other people and worst of all, by my mum who wasn't even there.
- I took a deep breath, went to the bar to get another drink, and another one… and that's.. that's all I can remember.
- MadamequiJune 2014Äänestä nyt!
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