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Hi)
Hello) My name is Asiya.
- I live in Moscow. Me 19 age.
- I work and study.
I want to learn English.
- I will glad new friends))

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- Hello) My name is Asiya.
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- I live in Moscow. Me 19 age.
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- I live in Moscow. Me 19 age. I live in Moscow. I am 19 years old. ¶
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- I live in Moscow. ~~Me 19 age~~I am 19 years old.
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- I live in Moscow~~. Me 19 age~~ and I'm 19 years old.
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- I work and study.
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- I work and study. I am a student and in a job.
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- I work and am a studyent.
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- I want to learn English.
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- I will glad new friends))
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- I will glad new friends)) I would like to make new friends))
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