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- holiday in amsterdam
- hi, i wan't to tell you that i'm going to holiday in amsterdam . i am very exicited . i can't wait till the day has coming. i can't wait till the time that i depart from jakarta to amsterdam, it's going to be my new experience.

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- hi, i wan't to tell you that i'm going to holiday in amsterdam . i am very exicited . i can't wait till the day has coming. i can't wait till the time that i depart from jakarta to amsterdam, it's going to be my new experience.
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- hHi, iI wan't to tell you that iI'm going ton holiday ~~in a~~to Amsterdam . iI am very exicited . iI can't wait till the day hais coming. iI can't wait till the time that iI depart from jJakarta to aAmsterdam~~, i~~. It's going to be mya new experience.
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- hi, iI wan't to tell you that iI'm going ton holiday into amsterdam . ~~i a~~I'm very exicited . iI can't wait untill theat day ~~has coming~~. iI can't wait untill the ~~time that i depart~~departure time from jJakarta to aAmsterdam, it's going to be mya new experience.
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