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    • What is a very important skill a person should learn in order to be successful in the world today?
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    • Modern world demands many things from people for being up-to-date: motivation, style, taste, easy-goingness, education, good manners etc. At the same time, in almost all professions one should know not only his or her occupation but also something from IT, skills of public speaking, writing, knowledge of foreign languages.
    • Moreover – one should fluently speak about politics, economics, classic literature and sometimes about music and art.
    • To my mind if one knows more than one foreign language he or she has a very nice start-up in his or her life.
    • In today grobalized world it’s very easy to go to foreign country, to have colleagues abroad or even to have work abroad.
    • But knowledge of language helps not only to have a nice career but also to be more broad-minded person.
    • One can know information which has not been translated to his or her language, for instance.
    • Or just to communicate with people from other countries and to learn the world deeper and from many sides.
    • So if one wants to be up-to-date and feel comfort and more possibilities in his or her life he should learn some language.
    • Because, quoting the classic, the more language we know the more time we individuals are.

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    • Modern world demands many things from people for being up-to-date: motivation, style, taste, easy-goingness, education, good manners etc. At the same time, in almost all professions one should know not only his or her occupation but also something from IT, skills of public speaking, writing, knowledge of foreign languages.
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    • MThe modern world demands many things from people for beingpeople to be up- to- date on many things: motivation, style, taste, easy-goingness, education, good manners etc. At the same time, in almost all professions, one should know not only his or her occupation but also something from IT, skills of public speaking skills, writing, knowledge of foreign languages.
    • MThe modern world demands many things from people for beingto be up-to-date: motivation, style, taste, easy-goingness, education, good manners etcand so on. At the same time, in almost all professions one should know not only his or her occupation but also something from IT, skills of public speaking, writing,being computer literate, having good public speaking skills, being able to write well and a knowledge of foreign languages.
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    • Moreover – one should fluently speak about politics, economics, classic literature and sometimes about music and art.
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    • Moreover, one should speak fluently speak about politics, economics, classic literature and sometimes about music and art.
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    • Moreover – one should be able to fluently speak about politics, economics, classic literature and sometimes about music and art.
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    • To my mind if one knows more than one foreign language he or she has a very nice start-up in his or her life.
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    • To my mind, if one knows more than one foreign language, he or she has a very nice head start-up in his or her life.
    • To my mind if one knows more than one foreign language he or she has a very nice start-up into his or her life.
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    • In today grobalized world it’s very easy to go to foreign country, to have colleagues abroad or even to have work abroad.
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    • In today's grlobalized world, it’s very easy to go to a foreign country, to have colleagues abroad or even to have work abroad.
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    • But knowledge of language helps not only to have a nice career but also to be more broad-minded person.
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    • But knowledge of language helps not only to have a nicegood career but also to be more broad-minded person.
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    • But knowledge of a language helps you not only to have a nice career but also to be a more broad-minded person.
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    • So if one wants to be up-to-date and feel comfort and more possibilities in his or her life he should learn some language.
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    • So if one wants to be up-to-date and feel comfortable and have more possibilities in his or her life, he should learn some languages.
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