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  • Should Parents Control Their Children's Time?

    • In modern society children have begun to watch a lots of videos and play video games.
  • As a result, they read less than 30 years ago, when their parents were growing up.
    • Therefore, it is believed that parents should limit the amount of the time of their children spend in front of a computer monitor and should make them read books instead.
  • In this essay I am going to discuss the viewpoints of those parents as well as those who do not think so and also give my opinion about that.
    • There is no doubt that some children are addicted to the newest media such as video games and videos such as movies, TV-shows and serials.
    • When a child that is spending all their time after school playing games and watching TV, they get lower grades than those that do not do such things.
  • Those children, who have good grades, differ because some of their parents control their time, which could instead be wasted, and make their children use that time in a beneficial way.
  • For instance, they help their children to understand school subjects and encourage them to read interesting books.
  • On the other hand, there are parents that do not want to disturb their child and make them read books and study after school.
    • As a result, this type of children has not only have low grades in the present moment but also can have a low chance to enrol in a college.
    • To conclude, parents are different in the way how they control their own children, of them encourage their children to read and study, while others neglect that.
    • In my opinion, parents should limit children’s time, which spent in front of media devices, and help their children to read important and interesting books for studying, which could help their children to have a better life in the future.

JU LUTEM NDIHMONI PËR TË KORIGJUAR ÇDO FJALI! - English

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    • Therefore, it is believed that parents should limit the amount of the time of their children spend in front of a computer monitor and should make them read books instead.
      Votoni tani!
    • Therefore, it is believed that parents should limit the amount of the time ofime their children spend in front of a computer monitorscreen and should make them read books instead.
      alexgr03alexgr03 profile picture Komente 1
      Votoni tani!
    • SHTO një KORRIGJIM TË RI! - Fjalia 3SHTO një KORRIGJIM TË RI! - Fjalia 3
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    • In this essay I am going to discuss the viewpoints of those parents as well as those who do not think so and also give my opinion about that.
      Votoni tani!
    • SHTO një KORRIGJIM TË RI! - Fjalia 4SHTO një KORRIGJIM TË RI! - Fjalia 4
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    • There is no doubt that some children are addicted to the newest media such as video games and videos such as movies, TV-shows and serials.
      Votoni tani!
    • There is no doubt that some children are addicted to the newest media such as video games and videos such as movies, TV-shows and TV-seriales.
      karlstrandkarlstrand profile picture Komente 1
      Votoni tani!
    • SHTO një KORRIGJIM TË RI! - Fjalia 5SHTO një KORRIGJIM TË RI! - Fjalia 5
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    • When a child that is spending all their time after school playing games and watching TV, they get lower grades than those that do not do such things.
      Votoni tani!
    • When a children that isare spending all of their time after school playing games and watching TV, they get lower grades than those that do not do such things.
      karlstrandkarlstrand profile picture Komente
      Votoni tani!
    • SHTO një KORRIGJIM TË RI! - Fjalia 6SHTO një KORRIGJIM TË RI! - Fjalia 6
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    • Those children, who have good grades, differ because some of their parents control their time, which could instead be wasted, and make their children use that time in a beneficial way.
      Votoni tani!
    • SHTO një KORRIGJIM TË RI! - Fjalia 7SHTO një KORRIGJIM TË RI! - Fjalia 7
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    • As a result, this type of children has not only have low grades in the present moment but also can have a low chance to enrol in a college.
      Votoni tani!
    • As a result, this type of children has not only have low grades in the present moment but can also can have a low chance to enrol in a college.
      karlstrandkarlstrand profile picture Komente
      Votoni tani!
    • As a result, this type of children has not only haves low grades inat the present moment, but can also can have a lower chance tof enrolling in a college.
      alexgr03alexgr03 profile picture Komente
      Votoni tani!
    • SHTO një KORRIGJIM TË RI! - Fjalia 10SHTO një KORRIGJIM TË RI! - Fjalia 10
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    • To conclude, parents are different in the way how they control their own children, of them encourage their children to read and study, while others neglect that.
      Votoni tani!
    • To conclude, parents are different in the way how they control their own children,. Some of them encourage their children to read and study, while others neglect that.
      karlstrandkarlstrand profile picture Komente
      Votoni tani!
    • To conclude, parents are different in the way howthat they control their own children,. Some of them encourage their children to read and study, whilest others neglect that.
      alexgr03alexgr03 profile picture Komente
      Votoni tani!
    • SHTO një KORRIGJIM TË RI! - Fjalia 11SHTO një KORRIGJIM TË RI! - Fjalia 11
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    • In my opinion, parents should limit children’s time, which spent in front of media devices, and help their children to read important and interesting books for studying, which could help their children to have a better life in the future.
      Votoni tani!
    • In my opinion, parents should limit children’s time, which is spent in front of media devices, and help their children to read important and interesting books for studying, which could help their children to have a better life in the future.
      alexgr03alexgr03 profile picture Komente
      Votoni tani!
    • SHTO një KORRIGJIM TË RI! - Fjalia 12SHTO një KORRIGJIM TË RI! - Fjalia 12